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Where are you?
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Just a random rant one night when I had nothing to do, but sit there and think.
Where are you?
Today I sit and think about you.
Of all my thoughts your one out of two.
You bring me smiles you bring me a dream.
A world without you would make me scream.
You seem so close yet you're so far away.
Night and day I just sit and pray.
My pasts been rough, my future...a bust?
But my smile holds strong with thoughts of us.
I know you're out there you're somewhere near.
But will I ever find you? That is what I fear.
Submitted on 2007-03-22 22:54:32
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This is an awesome piece! I absolutley love this poem........this and also your featured! This one is so unforced and flowy It truley is a gorgeous right and I can feel the emotion coming through it! Great work!
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