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    dots Submission Name: Where are you?dots
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    Author: dreamer37517
    ASL Info:    25/F/Bama
    Elite Ratio:    3.82 - 161/149/49
    Words: 91
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
    Total Views: 1029
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    Description:
       Just a random rant one night when I had nothing to do, but sit there and think.


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    dotsWhere are you?dots
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    Today I sit and think about you.
    Of all my thoughts your one out of two.
    You bring me smiles you bring me a dream.
    A world without you would make me scream.

    You seem so close yet you're so far away.
    Night and day I just sit and pray.
    My pasts been rough, my future...a bust?
    But my smile holds strong with thoughts of us.

    I know you're out there you're somewhere near.
    But will I ever find you? That is what I fear.







    Submitted on 2007-03-22 22:54:32     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This is an awesome piece! I absolutley love this poem........this and also your featured! This one is so unforced and flowy It truley is a gorgeous right and I can feel the emotion coming through it! Great work!
    | Posted on 2007-05-10 00:00:00 | by aNNmARIE | [ Reply to This ]


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