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    dots Submission Name: Don't Ask Medots
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    Author: Emo Angel
    ASL Info:    15/f/Texas
    Elite Ratio:    3.06 - 17/26/24
    Words: 102
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
    Total Views: 827
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    Description:
       I got tired of people asking me what was wrong all the time so now if I'm in a bad mood and people ask I just give them this.


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    dotsDon't Ask Medots
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    Don't ask me what is wrong
    because I won't tell you.
    I'll take it to my grave
    and never give you a clue.
    If you do ask me,
    I'll just smile and say
    nothing
    as I keep my tears at bay.
    So just believe what I say.
    Don't worry about me.
    Just leave me alone
    and let me be.
    If I start to cry,
    please come to my aide.
    I don't want to hear what you have to say
    because your words are my hearts blades.
    So again,
    don't ask me what's bothering me
    because I'll just smile and say
    nothing.




    Submitted on 2007-03-23 09:05:50     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This write I really like
    I too for many years held all my pain inside away from the World

    I will say though that when I started sharing some of the Love I held inside and didnt expect that Love to be returned that I started feeling better about myself
    You sound from your words that you have a Very good and strong Heart
    I will be Praying for you
    God Bless
    Ron

    Please if you get a chance Please take a look at some of my writes and let me know what you think
    Thank You
    Ron
    | Posted on 2007-03-23 00:00:00 | by Ronswords | [ Reply to This ]


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