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    dots Submission Name: Backwordsdots
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    Author: Twice
    Elite Ratio:    4 - 71/82/52
    Words: 32
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsBackwordsdots
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    Zebra
    Young
    x-cell
    with
    vigor
    unsung
    to
    stride
    restlessly
    quitly
    past
    ominous
    night
    moving
    looking
    killing
    just
    insisting
    he
    gets
    fed.....


    ends
    don't
    come
    back
    around





    Submitted on 2007-03-23 12:45:08     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      its the alphabet backwards...

    "ends dont come back around"

    is this piece about survival?

    Your words create quite the scenery.

    -Lolavie
    | Posted on 2007-03-23 00:00:00 | by lolavie | [ Reply to This ]


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