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Submission Name: Backwords dots

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Author:	Twice
Elite Ratio:	4 - 71/82/52
Words:	32

Class/Type:	Poetry/Misc
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Backwords dots

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Zebra
Young
x-cell
with
vigor
unsung
to
stride
restlessly
quitly
past
ominous
night
moving
looking
killing
just
insisting
he
gets
fed.....

ends
don't
come
back
around

Submitted on 2007-03-23 12:45:08 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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its the alphabet backwards...

"ends dont come back around"

is this piece about survival?

Your words create quite the scenery.

-Lolavie
| Posted on 2007-03-23 00:00:00 | by lolavie | [ Reply to This ]

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Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3 It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
It means a lot to them, as it does to you.