This has to be my favorite piece by you so far at least from what i have read. This is very well written and has some very creative lines. my favorite lines are:
"everything i earned in life
turned to glass and shattered."
"you turned against me
you--- i no longer trust."
I feel like i can really relate to it. beautiful piece of work!
This was written very well. It flowed nicely, and the emotion was portrayed was great. The only thing was the 1st and 3rd stanzas didn't rhyme to well. I can relate to this so well, especially right now. Though, my prolem is my mom. Great poem. Keep up the awesome work, and I'll keep reading.