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    dots Submission Name: The Pauper's Slavedots
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    Author: Broken
    Elite Ratio:    2.96 - 139/137/36
    Words: 67
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsThe Pauper's Slavedots
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    Today O jeremy u shall be king
    Tomorrow O jeremy a mere Pauper
    The day after O Jeremy the Paupers slave

    "Well how does that work" says Jeremy "that i shall go from King to a slave within 3 days"

    Well you made your own destiny my boy...For you were given a chance but used it unwisely and your tardiness has been your downfall!




    Submitted on 2004-06-10 16:27:24     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      interesting...i think thats the best i can come up with to describe this one. it seems kind of like an unfinished thought...or the beginnings of a story more than poetry. but thats just my opinion. and the grammar mistakes are kind of plentiful for such a short piece, i usually dont point that kind of thing out, but its slightly distracting. but its all a matter of style
    | Posted on 2004-06-10 00:00:00 | by LadyChaos | [ Reply to This ]



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