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    dots Submission Name: The Whispersdots
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    Author: cuddledumplin
    ASL Info:    36/ f/UK
    Elite Ratio:    4.08 - 6269/5927/526
    Words: 56
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    Description:
       This poem arose from a misreading of another poem called "Don't Turn on the Wipers" or something. Wipers was in there somewhere.


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    Don't turn on the whispers
    like you turn on a tap
    and make me feel guilty
    for just being me
    and make me feel crazy to listening
    to whispers from godknowswhere.
    Please don't turn on the whispers
    because I can't stand to doubt myself
    when I thought I was doing so well.






    Submitted on 2004-02-01 10:58:43     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      oh, shivers! Goosebumps all over the place!!! Very well written. Yet again, back in highschool... walking, seeing the cliques whispering and glancing at me... brr! I've found, however, that the whispers are on a constant slow drip, like an IV line... I've just learned to pretend I don't hear. Or I would go nuts. Excellent write.<><
    | Posted on 2004-03-21 00:00:00 | by WorththeWait | [ Reply to This ]
      I very much like the idea of the line "don't turn on the whispers". I like it.
    | Posted on 2004-02-01 00:00:00 | by Voodoo_Lounge | [ Reply to This ]
      This does seem very radioheadish, (i love radiohead) i like the comparison between whispers and tap water, it gives me a very interestin image
    | Posted on 2004-02-01 00:00:00 | by LadyChaos | [ Reply to This ]
      I too like "don't turn on the whispers"... things concealed are the most damaging - like whispers passed on in detrimental gossip...
    | Posted on 2004-02-01 00:00:00 | by hopefloats | [ Reply to This ]
      cheesycheesy last line tho!!.............................................................................
    | Posted on 2004-02-01 00:00:00 | by on1eday.co.uk | [ Reply to This ]
      godknowswhere eh?
    this is very radiohead using oxymorons!!
    im a moron...
    dont turn on the whispers- i like that line and it makes me think- like speak up you [censored] idiot or like getting so turned on when someone[not anyone!] whispers in your ear...
    'stop whispering stop shouting'...
    www.on1eday.co.uk
    | Posted on 2004-02-01 00:00:00 | by on1eday.co.uk | [ Reply to This ]


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