Writingpoetry

[ Join Free! ]
(No Spam mail)

dotsdots
nav
  • RolePlay
  • Join Us
  • Writings
  • Shoutbox
  • Community
  • Digg Mashup
  • Mp3 Search
  • Online Education
  • My Youtube
  • Ear Training
  • Funny Pics
  • nav



    nav
  • Role Play
  • Piano Music
  • Free Videos
  • Web 2.0
  • nav



    << | >>
    poetry


    dots Submission Name: The Whispersdots
    --------------------------------------------------------





    Author: cuddledumplin
    ASL Info:    36/ f/UK
    Elite Ratio:    4.08 - 6269/5927/526
    Words: 56
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 1195
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 363



    Description:
       This poem arose from a misreading of another poem called "Don't Turn on the Wipers" or something. Wipers was in there somewhere.


    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsThe Whispersdots
    -------------------------------------------


    Don't turn on the whispers
    like you turn on a tap
    and make me feel guilty
    for just being me
    and make me feel crazy to listening
    to whispers from godknowswhere.
    Please don't turn on the whispers
    because I can't stand to doubt myself
    when I thought I was doing so well.






    Submitted on 2004-02-01 10:58:43     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
    Submissions: [ Previous ] [ Next ]

    Rate This Submission

    1: >_<
    2: I dunno...
    3: meh!
    4: Pretty cool
    5: Wow!




    ||| Comments |||
      oh, shivers! Goosebumps all over the place!!! Very well written. Yet again, back in highschool... walking, seeing the cliques whispering and glancing at me... brr! I've found, however, that the whispers are on a constant slow drip, like an IV line... I've just learned to pretend I don't hear. Or I would go nuts. Excellent write.<><
    | Posted on 2004-03-21 00:00:00 | by WorththeWait | [ Reply to This ]
      I very much like the idea of the line "don't turn on the whispers". I like it.
    | Posted on 2004-02-01 00:00:00 | by Voodoo_Lounge | [ Reply to This ]
      This does seem very radioheadish, (i love radiohead) i like the comparison between whispers and tap water, it gives me a very interestin image
    | Posted on 2004-02-01 00:00:00 | by LadyChaos | [ Reply to This ]
      I too like "don't turn on the whispers"... things concealed are the most damaging - like whispers passed on in detrimental gossip...
    | Posted on 2004-02-01 00:00:00 | by hopefloats | [ Reply to This ]
      cheesycheesy last line tho!!.............................................................................
    | Posted on 2004-02-01 00:00:00 | by on1eday.co.uk | [ Reply to This ]
      godknowswhere eh?
    this is very radiohead using oxymorons!!
    im a moron...
    dont turn on the whispers- i like that line and it makes me think- like speak up you [censored] idiot or like getting so turned on when someone[not anyone!] whispers in your ear...
    'stop whispering stop shouting'...
    www.on1eday.co.uk
    | Posted on 2004-02-01 00:00:00 | by on1eday.co.uk | [ Reply to This ]


    Think Feedback more than Compliments :: [ Guidelines ]

    1. Be honest.
    2. Try not to give only compliments.
    3. How did it make you feel?
    4. Why did it make you feel that way?
    5. Which parts?
    6. What distracted from the piece?
    7. What was unclear?
    8. What does it remind you of?
    9. How could it be improved?
    10. What would you have done differently?
    11. What was your interpretation of it?
    12. Does it feel original?



    1388

    Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
    It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

    Supernatural Cowboy Sleuth (1) written by endlessgame23
    To the Devil and Candle written by HisNameIsNoMore
    I AM THANKFUL FOR written by Ramneet
    prison written by ShyOne
    Tartarus written by endlessgame23
    Day 5 written by TheStillSilence
    The Unicorn written by BlazeFlamme
    When Sirens Whisper written by HisNameIsNoMore
    Etiquette written by saartha
    Coversheets written by TheStillSilence
    to Be like written by KeeperOfLight
    Supernatural Cowboy Sleuth (5) written by endlessgame23
    Relativity written by poetotoe
    i've missed written by mysalvation
    winners circle written by ShyOne
    Still Perfectly Flawed written by armand
    Supernatural Cowboy Sleuth written by endlessgame23
    Dream written by closetpoet
    Life is moments written by Ramneet
    // Seasonal Song written by ShadowParadox
    The Poems Death written by Mepoduo
    Vortex: The Imagination That Is written by KeeperOfLight
    Lost Inside the Race written by ForgottenGraves
    I, Plutarch written by HisNameIsNoMore
    Delicious Stews written by elephantasia
    phantom limbs written by expiring_touch
    Shi written by ShyOne
    Shut Up written by annie0888
    Reliquary of Writ written by HisNameIsNoMore
    Florida's Autumn Solstice written by closetpoet

    Google
     


    poetry

    dotsLogindots

    User Name:

    Password:

    [ Quick Signup ]
    [ Lost Password ]


    January 10 07
    131,497 Poems
    Posted

    I have 14,000+ Subscribers on Youtube. See my Video Tutorials

    [ Angst Poetry ]
    [ Cutters ]
    [ Famous Poetry ]
    [ Poetry Scams ]



    FontSize:
    [ Smaller ] [ Bigger ]
     Poetry