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Submission Name: the lambent artery dots

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Author:	blackbird
ASL Info:	31/male/reykjavik iceland
Elite Ratio:	2.35 - 194/328/300
Words:	147

Class/Type:	Prose/Longing
Total Views:	452
Average Vote:	5.0000
Bytes:	1006

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the lambent artery dots

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i suffer curly waves of inner longing
cork-screwed etchings on my deep eye
the liquid night moves through me
wilted dolls favoring the collapse

i search the room for my sacred seraph
my angel vested in warm vellum
bejeweled in intricate heavens
like a heron embedded in my palm

if others could see the lambent artery
the twisting cobble i do breathe
graceful wonders i do tread upon
they'd surely reinvent their skins

i engage her many tortuous pores
a pirate of touching fingers undoing
minute corridors into her complex ears
waking in her twisted hair

i am programmed devoutly
whispers laying secrets in her mind
i will always compass to her
my puzzle filled with fire

i am the tenor of her inmost light
the cockle of her liberated heart
now more than ever
letting what must be slipped slip

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ooh beauty flowing across the page, like silk sheets accross smooth skin. darling you leave me breathless
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