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    dots Submission Name: Personalitydots
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    Author: marray proetus
    ASL Info:    100/F/no where
    Elite Ratio:    3.9 - 24/32/30
    Words: 96
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 943
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    Bytes: 593



    Description:
       Sometimes the most beautiful people can be called ugly. Because of their personality.

    On the other hand sometimes the normal people can be named the most beautiful if they have a wonderful personality.

    So it doesn't matter whether you're beautiful or just plain looking. Your personality is what will make you stand out.

    ps: I hope that is a good description.


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    dotsPersonalitydots
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    She smiled at me and instantly I knew why she stood out.

    "She wasn't a beauty,
    but she had a shine
    She didn't dress up
    but she seemed so fine
    She didn't put on an act
    but was always true
    She had problems like everyone else
    but never let them loom

    She had a smile of an angel
    that never dimmed
    She had a spirit
    that never grew grim

    But most of all what stood out to me,
    was that she was alwyas herself
    no matter what the circumstances would be




    Submitted on 2007-03-25 08:26:17     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      This is really beautiful
    Ireally liked the way you let your true Heart shine in your words
    One can tell you are a caring Loving person who only wants to help others
    I pray you never change
    God Bless
    Ron

    Please if you get a chance Please take a look at some of my writes and let me know what you think
    Thank You
    Ron
    | Posted on 2007-03-25 00:00:00 | by Ronswords | [ Reply to This ]
      This is lovely Marray, and is a tribute to the old saying that beauty "starts on the inside"! This was a wonderful poem that told a wonderful story!
    | Posted on 2007-03-25 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]


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