Writingpoetry

[ Join Free! ]
(No Spam mail)

dotsdots
nav
  • Join Us
  • Writings
  • ES Magazine
  • Shoutbox
  • Community
  • Digg Mashup
  • Mp3 Search
  • Online Education
  • Video Tutorials
  • RolePlay
  • 90% off Amazon
  • Funny Pics
  • nav



    nav
  • Role Play
  • Piano Music
  • Free Videos
  • Web 2.0
  • nav



    << | >>
    poetry


    dots Submission Name: Notebook Filled With Feardots
    --------------------------------------------------------





    Author: roses
    ASL Info:    13/F/Wherever you want me
    Elite Ratio:    3.52 - 44/57/25
    Words: 169
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 66
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1063



    Description:
       I don't know, another bored poem. Tell me what you think


    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsNotebook Filled With Feardots
    -------------------------------------------


    Born with a pencil in her hand
    before words in her veins
    in a lonely kind of land
    with very few remains
    she ignores the splatters on the page
    and wipes her tears far away
    she must finish this poem, the world is her stage
    to fill with her rage and dismay
    her hand shakes with uncertainty
    her heart clenches with nervous thoughts
    everything inside her is all a plea
    bursting inside a frightened box
    she sets down the pencil and looks
    looks at the creation she's made
    she assures herself that her work will be in books
    filled with relations of being afraid and betrayed
    she breathes as she stores it under her bed
    a notebook bursting with fear
    but they don't understand that writing is not just in her head
    it's in her heart, her blood, her soul, her tears
    it's not just on the paper, plain for the eye to see
    it's far but near, it's lying but sincere, everything, it all? Is in me




    Submitted on 2007-03-25 18:40:39     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
    Submissions: [ Previous ] [ Next ]

    Rate This Submission

    1: >_<
    2: I dunno...
    3: meh!
    4: Pretty cool
    5: Wow!




    ||| Comments |||
      This write I really like you speak truth with your words

    All of us at one time or another hope when we are gone that are memory lives on helping another
    I also saw in your words someone who is trying to find their way in life but is also a little afraid to let their true self show

    Again I really liked this
    I look forward to reading more from you in the future
    God Bless
    Ron

    Please if you get a chance Please take a look at some of my writes and let me know what you think
    Thank You
    Ron
    | Posted on 2007-03-25 00:00:00 | by Ronswords | [ Reply to This ]



    Full Anime Episodes Streaming Free
    5 million youtube videos all rated over 4.7 stars with 40+ ratings

    [ Copy this | Start New | Full Size ]

    Google
     

    [ Chrispian ] [ Write Forum ]
    [ Friends ] [ SNESroms ] .
    poetry

    dotsLogindots

    User Name:

    Password:

    [ Quick Signup ]
    [ Lost Password ]


    January 10 07
    131,497 Poems
    Posted

    I have 14,000+ Subscribers on Youtube. See my Video Tutorials

    [ Angst Poetry ]
    [ Cutters ]
    [ Famous Poetry ]
    [ Poetry Scams ]



    FontSize:
    [ Smaller ] [ Bigger ]
     Poetry
    This user has been inactive for more than 5 days.