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    dots Submission Name: Read My Minddots
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    Author: PolaroidMemory
    ASL Info:    18/F/IN
    Elite Ratio:    2.93 - 99/93/28
    Words: 130
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 120
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 760



    Description:
       I wrote this about my boyfriend and I because I've always had a hard time with communicating my feelings. I wanted to write about it for some reason.


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    dotsRead My Minddots
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    I have no way of saying the things I need to say.
    I could write a song but that is too clichè.
    I haven't had much luck with telling you how I feel.
    Whenever something is wrong, you know my lips stay sealed.
    Half the time I'm fine; I'm happy as can be.
    I'm just in deep thought, thinking of you and me.
    You don't need to worry, you have my heart, it's true.
    Even when I'm not speaking, I'm never mad at you.
    If ever I am sad or mad about something you have done,
    I'll be sure to let you know because fighting is no fun.
    I haven't been this happy in such a long, long time.
    The only person I can blame is you, because you're mine.




    Submitted on 2007-03-25 18:46:09     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      this is a really good poem. the best thing about being your best friend is that you never have a problem telling me how you feel about someone or something. i think that is the best kind of friendship that there is out there. without you there are no real friendships. you are the best friend that anyone could ask for. thanx beast.

    ~ courtney ~
    | Posted on 2007-04-06 00:00:00 | by luvinanelevator | [ Reply to This ]
      i like this poem it is short and gets the point across you said so much in so little words. i think this was one of your higher writtings. good job
    <3 Evie Zimora
    | Posted on 2007-03-26 00:00:00 | by Evie | [ Reply to This ]
      Nice poem I like it, very visual and imaginative. I like how it feels like you put your emotions towards the poem and how I felt it and if that is what you were coming across then you did it keep up the good work peace & stay safe...
    | Posted on 2007-03-25 00:00:00 | by Cordell | [ Reply to This ]



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