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Author: Ghetto_King
ASL Info:    19 m ft. lauderdale
Elite Ratio:    0.76 - 4 /33 /54
Words: 280
Class/Type: Poetry /Passion
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As I take my ice wrap tongue making a trail from top down
Blowing cold air, as I kiss your neck sending shivers down
Continuing my trail with a tour of your chest
From the warmth of your body ice grows smaller and melts
As tongue motions switch from right to left
Passion pressing against you’re lungs leaving you short of breath
Taking another piece of ice as I continue on my route
Moving my tongue kissing down going too regions south
As I leave you in ga, so much so that moans fly from mouth
In and out your thighs with the ice my route
As I come to the place where life god brings
Now with my tongue I play this love song an with glee you sing
From solid to liquid the ice change
Converting my tongue to a sponge now the stage
Back and forth your playing ground I slowly run
Taking my slow time with every motion increasing your fun
As tongue motions move from slow too fast and your insides run
As pleasure becomes vase leaving you short of breathe and stunned
As I move deeper between thighs with my tongue your body I read
As you play in passion paradise and total bliss is seen
As the cold air brings your body too a point of ice-cold ecstasy leaving you chilled
Sending you to cloud nine the feeling every bit real
Now with the feeling time is slowed
In this icy passion your surround and roll
With a piece of frozen water begin this icy slope
Leaving your body chilled as the story goes

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