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    dots Submission Name: The Lastdots

    Author: allmine
    ASL Info:    25/chick/your nightmares
    Elite Ratio:    2.52 - 33/69/45
    Words: 103
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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       I wrote this about a girl and a guy and the girl would do anything to either b ewith this guy or to not like him at all... And every day he tortures her... draging her along.. makeing her belive he likes her.. giveing her just enough hope to keep her comming back for more......(its a true story so this discription is detailed....)

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    dotsThe Lastdots

    The last tear drips from her eyes
    The last drop of blood drips from her wrist
    She’s disappearing slowly
    But can you tell
    Can you see what you’ve done to her?
    You’ve broken the last piece of her heart
    You’ve turned her into someone cold
    She’s completely numb to the world around her
    And it’s all because of you
    You’re little lies and half truths
    Why did she believe you?
    Don’t you care?
    You’ve killed a part of her
    And now she’s almost dead
    She use to have hopes and dreams
    Now she lives her nightmares
    Unable to escape………………

    Submitted on 2007-03-26 14:02:53     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      it seems a little too dark for me, but thats just personal preference... the imagery was good... and to the description, ik the exact feeling except vice versa... meaning, im a guy who loves this girl and she keeps making it seem like she likes me, but idk how she truly cares and sometimes she ends up hurting me.... but enough about my problems... lol good work
    | Posted on 2007-03-26 00:00:00 | by rapius | [ Reply to This ]

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