Description: I wrote this about a girl and a guy and the girl would do anything to either b ewith this guy or to not like him at all... And every day he tortures her... draging her along.. makeing her belive he likes her.. giveing her just enough hope to keep her comming back for more......(its a true story so this discription is detailed....)
The Last -------------------------------------------
The last tear drips from her eyes
The last drop of blood drips from her wrist
She’s disappearing slowly
But can you tell
Can you see what you’ve done to her?
You’ve broken the last piece of her heart
You’ve turned her into someone cold
She’s completely numb to the world around her
And it’s all because of you
You’re little lies and half truths
Why did she believe you?
Don’t you care?
You’ve killed a part of her
And now she’s almost dead
She use to have hopes and dreams
Now she lives her nightmares
Unable to escape………………
it seems a little too dark for me, but thats just personal preference... the imagery was good... and to the description, ik the exact feeling except vice versa... meaning, im a guy who loves this girl and she keeps making it seem like she likes me, but idk how she truly cares and sometimes she ends up hurting me.... but enough about my problems... lol good work