Description: Inspired by the childrens book "If you give a Mouse a Cookie"
If you lick a dick -------------------------------------------
If you lick a dick
it wont want you to stop
it'll have you licking
until it blows it's top
once you blow it's top
you'll have to lick it dry
and maybe if you're lucky
you could spread your things
after you spread those things
and he goes inside
he'll lose himself, on
"this magic carpet ride"
but you're not done yet
you forgot your pill
and it's not the flu
that's making you ill
you just rid yourself
of all those crabs
now that dick you licked
is gonna be a dad
but you come to find
the bastards in jail
on sodomy charges
and can't post bail
now you're pregnant and
have to quit your day job
Angel and Hope will cover
on your "time needed off"
but your childs a bastard
and his dads in jail
the preacher told you
"you're going to hell!"
so if you lick a dick
know now in good faith
all the consequnces
that may take place!
lmao I read this the day you posted it...didn't really know what to say then; kinda still don't but I like reading your shyt and i hate reading && not commenting..so yeah.
it was funny....and then got this kinda almost cynically realistic viewpoint; all your writing is soooo 'in your face' in some way, I like it though. it really didn't surprise me....
that you were able to do this so easily, make a point in a charasmatic way...hell maybe you *are* a genius ;) you know what they say about that fine line between genius and insanity .
what's curious to me is what made *that* of all books cross your mind? your CP class isn't THAT interactive is it? :P
nice write..and hehe...you turn Ron off.....that must be a wonderful relief Love and peace,
-Jess-
Cheesy joke? I was just reading this for the hell of it and feel as if I must comment. The first stanza had me laughing but then it got serious... and I wasn't sure how to react at the time and then the ending pulled it all together with a grim realisation of reality and that was great in my opinion. A serious message complete with a comedy alliterative title. It can't get much better than that can it? Surely not?!
The begining of this write really turned me off
HOWEVER
In the middle and the ending really made me realize exactly what you were talking about
I agree with you a 100 percent
Always think of the consequences before you perform any act
I believe that is one of the biggest problems with society in that we never think before we soeak or act
Great Job
God Bless
Ron
Please if you get achance Please take a look at some of my writes and let me know what you think
Thank You
Ron
Submission Name: If you lick a dick
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Love and peace,
