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    dots Submission Name: an angel never closes her eyesdots
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    Author: sbridges
    ASL Info:    33/F/Los Angeles
    Elite Ratio:    2.94 - 119/119/63
    Words: 103
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    an angel never closes her eyes

    with irridescent and bright-white-lighted eyelids
    an angel never closes her eyes
    opal-painted,
    when the lids fall, the curtains flash in front of you
    all you see is pure light
    and you get to look into very open eyes
    the kind that see, with and omnipresent and omnipotent eye,
    all the true
    and leave the rest behind ,
    all alone in oblivion
    so that her white-bright-filtered eyes can see into you too
    and with her, that feels Good because
    deconstructed,
    you are Good
    and an angel knows that because
    an angel never closes her eyes




    Submitted on 2007-03-26 14:39:26     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    I love angels and I have felt their presence and that is such a comforting feeling. I loved the title and also the indication that they truly do not judge with their eyes - they see us and appreciate us, like God, for who we are

    love,peace,joy&smiles to shrare
    tif
    | Posted on 2007-05-30 00:00:00 | by Epiphany | [ Reply to This ]


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