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    dots Submission Name: Crazy Billdots
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    Author: DonkeyMan
    Elite Ratio:    0.34 - 89/88/61
    Words: 43
    Class/Type: Limerick/Comedy
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    dotsCrazy Billdots
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    There was an old man named Bill
    Who forgot to take his pill
    He ate and ate
    right through the gate
    Into his neighbors yard
    Who had hired an armed guard
    Thats the end of my story
    I hope it wasn't too gory




    Submitted on 2007-03-26 15:07:40     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      nope not to gory. but funny.
    | Posted on 2007-03-26 00:00:00 | by WD-40 | [ Reply to This ]


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