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    dots Submission Name: What is eternitydots
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    Author: Non-Sens-Uality
    Elite Ratio:    2.94 - 67/80/53
    Words: 187
    Class/Type: Poetry/Passion
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    dotsWhat is eternitydots
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    What is eternity? A spider -
    Cought helplessly in its own web
    Where only Light reflects existence
    of the artistic and the sad...

    What is eternity? A second -
    A line between plasure and pain
    A kiss so pure, within temptation,
    A tender touch, a wicked game...

    What is eternity? A distance -
    A night of doubts between the two
    The cruel reality, reminds me
    A rose has thorns, and so do you.

    What is eternity? A snowflake -
    Falls on your lips and melts away
    So do my thoughts within your presence
    I'd like to run... and still... I stay.

    What is eternity? Illusion -
    A lie to keep me close, I fear...
    But what is truth, or good and evil?
    Who am I, can you tell me, dear?

    What is eternity? An angel -
    Cold, watching me from up above.
    A demon, cognitive distortion...
    I don't know... do we call it love?

    What is eternity? My poem -
    My words and lines - nonsense for you
    What is eternity? A story...
    Tempus... die... nox... est tu.




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