[ Join Free! ]
(No Spam mail)

  • RolePlay
  • Join Us
  • Writings
  • Shoutbox
  • Community
  • Digg Mashup
  • Mp3 Search
  • Online Education
  • My Youtube
  • Ear Training
  • Funny Pics
  • nav

  • Role Play
  • Piano Music
  • Free Videos
  • Web 2.0
  • nav

    << | >>

    dots Submission Name: The Perfect Guydots

    Author: CaughtRedhanded
    ASL Info:    18/F/TN
    Elite Ratio:    4.23 - 94/41/22
    Words: 125
    Class/Type: Poetry/
    Total Views: 890
    Average Vote:    4.0000
    Bytes: 1023

       I wrote this a long time ago right after I met a late boyfriend...

    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsThe Perfect Guydots

    Can you please...
    just curess my hair,
    and embrace me in your loving arms,
    without a care?

    Can you please...
    pick me up,
    and kiss my lips,
    Maybe there will be room for afew loving grips.

    Can you please...
    look straight in my eyes,
    touch my face<center>
    and take me away from this place?

    Can you tame,
    the wildness in my heart,
    that has tore so many guys apart.

    Can you love me
    with all your heart;
    and treat me like a Goddess from the start?

    Make me love you
    I open this heart of mine.
    So please can you...

    be the perfect guy???

    Submitted on 2007-03-26 18:50:42     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
    Submissions: [ Previous ] [ Next ]

    Rate This Submission

    1: >_<
    2: I dunno...
    3: meh!
    4: Pretty cool
    5: Wow!

    ||| Comments |||
      I think every girl is looking for the perfect guy. No one can find one, though
    Don't give up just b/c you can't find him. He's out there somewhere.
    Great poem, very catchy and excellently written. I've said it before and I'll say it again, you are a very great writer.
    | Posted on 2008-08-29 00:00:00 | by bubble_popper15 | [ Reply to This ]
      We all want the perfect guy... I thought I had him but the illuaion was, thankfully, shattered. Good luck. :)
    | Posted on 2007-03-27 00:00:00 | by BrokenAngelKat | [ Reply to This ]
      Don't we all want the perfect guy? Good luck finding him.
    Your poem is really good btw:)
    | Posted on 2007-03-27 00:00:00 | by T. Garrett | [ Reply to This ]

    Think Feedback more than Compliments :: [ Guidelines ]

    1. Be honest.
    2. Try not to give only compliments.
    3. How did it make you feel?
    4. Why did it make you feel that way?
    5. Which parts?
    6. What distracted from the piece?
    7. What was unclear?
    8. What does it remind you of?
    9. How could it be improved?
    10. What would you have done differently?
    11. What was your interpretation of it?
    12. Does it feel original?


    Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
    It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

    In the Mouth of Elysium written by HisNameIsNoMore
    To the King written by HisNameIsNoMore
    Wasps written by Wolfwatching
    In the end written by Janesaddiction
    Push written by JanePlane
    I will call out your name written by RisingSon
    The Song on Your Guitar written by SavedDragon
    Giving written by jjd
    Cage written by distortedcloud
    Love Can Be... written by HAVENSMITH92
    Bond written by saartha
    Hollow Points written by RequiemOfDreams
    4th Season of Vivaldi written by HisNameIsNoMore
    Ten Poems written by Wolfwatching
    Linger written by saartha
    Date night written by expiring_touch
    One Thing written by Wolfwatching
    new moon written by CrypticBard
    In My Head written by faideddarkness
    Munyonyo written by expiring_touch
    This written by Chelebel
    It's been a while written by Sharati_hottie
    Sunset written by rev.jpfadeproof
    untitled written by Chelebel
    Summer Nights written by ollie_wicked
    Be Free written by hybridsongwrite
    Unfortunate Reality written by TeslaKoyal
    Fathoms of the Lullaby Sea written by HisNameIsNoMore
    Wish written by Daniel Barlow
    Hopelessly Blind written by ForgottenGraves




    User Name:


    [ Quick Signup ]
    [ Lost Password ]

    January 10 07
    131,497 Poems

    I have 14,000+ Subscribers on Youtube. See my Video Tutorials

    [ Angst Poetry ]
    [ Cutters ]
    [ Famous Poetry ]
    [ Poetry Scams ]

    [ Smaller ] [ Bigger ]