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    dots Submission Name: Butterflydots
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    Author: CaughtRedhanded
    ASL Info:    18/F/TN
    Elite Ratio:    4.23 - 94/41/22
    Words: 23
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 716
    Average Vote:    4.0000
    Bytes: 148



    Description:
       I wrote this poem a while back and it goes out to my boyfriend of a year


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    dotsButterflydots
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    If I were a butterfly,
    you would be my wings
    Without you,
    I would miss out,
    on so many good things!

    <3




    Submitted on 2007-03-26 18:54:51     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      thats pretty good it's short and yet prtty cute and cachty
    | Posted on 2007-11-20 00:00:00 | by vencix | [ Reply to This ]
      Aww...so cute....
    -Amber-
    | Posted on 2007-11-19 00:00:00 | by never_far_away | [ Reply to This ]
      I like it, beautiful, simple, and symbolic.

    But next time, don't bother typing in HTML.
    | Posted on 2007-03-26 00:00:00 | by shastasheen | [ Reply to This ]


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