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    dots Submission Name: Punk Haterdots
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    Author: CaughtRedhanded
    ASL Info:    18/F/TN
    Elite Ratio:    4.23 - 94/41/22
    Words: 114
    Class/Type: Poetry/Venting
    Total Views: 727
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    Description:
       this goes out to a punk dude named Mark Adam... he makes me soo mad he thinks he knows everything... grrrr


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    dotsPunk Haterdots
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    Hey!
    Stop!
    Get out of my face!
    Whats wromg with you;
    you sick stupid punk?
    Why don't you take your
    goverment hatin,
    red-boot wearin,
    anti-conformist self
    and split!
    I'm tired of all this S***
    Dude just back off,
    give me my space
    before you regret
    getting up in my face...
    and while your at it
    shave you head
    that mohawk looks
    gay anyways!
    So now I'm done
    thats it
    this is over!
    But this undieing
    hate
    will continue to manifest
    as long as you're wearing that
    Camo.
    Anarchy.
    Vest.






    Submitted on 2007-03-26 19:17:48     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      this is kind of dumb...
    | Posted on 2008-02-05 00:00:00 | by EEKS | [ Reply to This ]
      yeahh just be like NO WAY PUNK!

    | Posted on 2007-03-26 00:00:00 | by WD-40 | [ Reply to This ]


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