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    Author: CaughtRedhanded
    ASL Info:    18/F/TN
    Elite Ratio:    4.23 - 94/41/22
    Words: 74
    Class/Type: Poetry/What you did
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       I wrote this when I was in 9th grade in highschool... now I'm in 11th...


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    dotsYoudots
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    I thought you liked me.
    I thought you cared.
    I thought you were the one
    that would alwasy be there.
    TI thought you understood.
    I thought you could relate.
    I didn't want to find out this way.
    You couldn't tell me to my face,
    deep down I think I knew
    I just didn't want it to be true

    I never thought I would get hurt at lest not by you...




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      I have felt like this quite recently, so i can sort of relate. not everyone is like we expect them to be, and we get frustrated. and we know we are just wrong about them and that they arent like we think, but we just don't want to accept it.

    i agree, you captured it in words very well.
    i just found some spelling mistakes....
    alwasy-->always
    TI -->I
    lest -->least

    a bit clichéd, as i have written on this as well :P it is true tho.

    -allyn
    | Posted on 2008-03-19 00:00:00 | by allyn d. | [ Reply to This ]
      this is a really good poem and this is the same thing that happin to me and you make your poems
    | Posted on 2007-11-30 00:00:00 | by jjd | [ Reply to This ]
      This is so effing true, and I have been in this same situation but, you captured it in words wonderfully!

    <3

    Liz
    | Posted on 2007-11-19 00:00:00 | by Liz_Renee | [ Reply to This ]


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