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    dots Submission Name: Goodbye and go diedots
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    Author: Mr.Seth
    Elite Ratio:    1.55 - 2/5/14
    Words: 210
    Class/Type: Poetry/Angry
    Total Views: 722
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       sorry about the coarse language, but it's how i felt so I just let my feelings pour out through my pen


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    dotsGoodbye and go diedots
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    You are the cause of my problems, the source of my pain
    You fuck with my heart like it's some kind of game
    Why do you have to be such a bitch?
    Can't you just set your heart on one wish?
    I don't deserve this, the shit you're putting me through
    you'll see my back as I leave and be lost without a clue
    Ha, you wanna come crawling back? Here's what I'll do:
    I'll laugh in your face and say FUCK YOU!!
    You had your chance bitch, many at that
    And yet you were always the same in how you act
    No matter what, you weren't happy
    You lied, you hurt me, you made me feel crappy
    Now i'm done trying to make it work
    All you've been is a big fat jerk!
    I'm not perfect, I make mistakes
    And what do you do? You throw them in my face!!
    You are a problem, a pain in my ass
    And you'll try and come crawling back
    It'll be too late though, I'll have someone else
    Someone who won't make my life a living hell
    You broke my heart, you messed with my mind
    I can't take it anymore!!! I'm done with your kind
    Goodbye and go die




    Submitted on 2007-03-26 22:54:07     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      alright, Seth, you made me feel really guilty. i know there's someone who can (and does) say the same about me (even though he killed me first). This kinda had a sing-song feel. you know, na-na, taunting type thing. you get it. i loved the last line, very powerful. way to sock it to her.
    | Posted on 2007-03-27 00:00:00 | by Alyra | [ Reply to This ]

    Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
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