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Things are pretty messed up ...yay... more poems..
Stop stop …
Look at you
Graveling begging … at my feet..
I long to give no mercy but I could never
Although you never gave me mercy
Ripping off my clothes
Telling me these lies so you can have your way with me
Hoping and pray now that time has taken its toll
I do not mention a word of what has happened
You told me you love me
You told me that’s how you show your love
At age thirteen I thought just maybe
That its okay
But time has proven you wrong
Yet again you’ve used me
As others have
How ironic you’re worried of boys…
Men, with a higher moral status than yourself
Men whom actually have respect for women to use me
Worried I may not spear your life..
You kiss my ass
Telling me all I want to hear now.
As if I can’t see what you’re doing
Don’t act so blinded…
Stop pretending you know nothing of what I speak…
You my… Fr..frii…Friend
Have are hurt me to great…
I have decided being with you
Is not in my best interest…
So please accept this farewell
Hope to never cross paths again!!!!
Submitted on 2007-03-27 02:07:44
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Nice.... Did he really kiss your ass
, only kidding. These are really great, and again, I really enjoy reading stuff like this (and I dont read much! Only song lyrics and poetry, oh yeah! and sheet music)
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