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    dots Submission Name: Alonedots
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    Author: AngelinDisguise
    ASL Info:    23/F/AUS
    Elite Ratio:    2.23 - 133/171/100
    Words: 94
    Class/Type: Poetry/Alone
    Total Views: 562
    Average Vote:    4.5000
    Bytes: 522



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    dotsAlonedots
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    Hold me close and donít let go
    I'm so scared to be alone
    I've been by myself for too long
    And always had to be strong
    Now I only want to rest
    And lay my head on your chest
    Hold me close and donít let go
    These wars I fight no one knows
    Now whisper how you love me
    Say it tender and softly
    I am weary and soon will sleep
    But with you no longer will I weep
    So hold me close and don't let go
    For I never want to be alone




    Submitted on 2007-03-27 07:10:00     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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       i feel your pain ive been alone for as far back as i can remeber and it sucks but this poem puts it all in words and am not able to do that
    thank you
    | Posted on 2007-03-27 00:00:00 | by bigothboy | [ Reply to This ]


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