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    dots Submission Name: My Point Of Viewdots
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    Author: AngelinDisguise
    ASL Info:    23/F/AUS
    Elite Ratio:    2.23 - 133/171/100
    Words: 157
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsMy Point Of Viewdots
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    U hate me because I scream
    i tell you to go to hell
    you hate me because im angry
    and take it all out on my self
    you judge me because im different
    im afraid to b the same
    you tell me im nothing
    and your minds will never change
    you treat me like an hour glass
    you wait for my time to run out
    you treat me like a death threat
    who doesnt know what life is all about
    you make me feel like a monster
    when you look me in the eyes
    they way you stare and judge me
    it makes me want to cry
    you cause my mind to think horribly
    so many morbid thoughts
    you make me lose thought of happiness
    all the amazing things are forgot
    you tear me a part
    its bad enough i let you
    you make me feel like a small thing
    but thats just my point of view




    Submitted on 2007-03-27 09:11:52     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      the end wasn't exactly as powerful as i expected, but overall it kept my attention and was mildly entertaining. good job. i like your twisted thinking.
    </3 lisa
    | Posted on 2007-03-27 00:00:00 | by 777sacrites777 | [ Reply to This ]


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