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    dots Submission Name: Again and again...dots

    Author: rubymoon
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    It hurts to be in the arms of the one you love,
    And know that you can never be his,
    Why is it so tormenting? This love,
    That hurts even to be his.

    It hurts to lie in his arms,
    Waiting for time to take him away,
    The endless clock who march its long arms,
    Fast, without stopping on its way.

    We part,
    We find each other,
    The complete of the other part,
    Which was broken, we thought forever.

    To wait for that parting again,
    To the hurt and sorrow,
    With nothing to gain,
    Except that endless wait for tomorrow.

    Tomorrow where we might find each other,
    The wake with hopefulness,
    That we might find one another,
    But to bed we go with emptiness.

    Even if we did find each other,
    We would only part again and again,
    From one lifetime to another,
    The end always follows us again.

    We cannot run from it,
    No matter how fast,
    We cannot hide from it,
    It will only find us just as fast.

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      To wait for that parting again,
    To the hurt and sorrow,
    With nothing to gain,
    Except that endless wait for tomorrow.

    My favorite part
    | Posted on 2015-01-09 00:00:00 | by Teofila | [ Reply to This ]
      The pain of being in the arms of a loved one,
    Tormenting, and haunting….
    But it hurts more, to be alone away from you,
    And it bleeds to be alone….

    Time will never stop, not for us,
    Does it matter….?
    Lying in my arms, does time matter,
    When you are my world and time itself…

    To complete one another, we find each other
    Endless is the journey…
    Never knowing when we can rest, to have each other
    And complete what was lost thought forever…

    And though we wait for that parting again
    A mark upon the heavens made…
    An echo into eternal memories, of us
    For only just us…

    Waking to hope, to find each other
    Is there no better…
    To wake to only think of you, beyond first and never last
    To wake to HOPE…

    To part and find each other again, and endless journey
    But with each journey…
    It brings me closer to you, and I see through immortal eyes
    Endless that is coming to an end…

    We need not run, we need not fear,
    For you are in my embrace…
    And time has no meaning…
    And an endless journey would have no end but an end…
    | Posted on 2007-03-29 00:00:00 | by FallenAngelJC | [ Reply to This ]

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