Description: i wrote this w/o much thought like i do with most of my pieces...i was feelingt angry when i wrote it......feeedback will be greatly appreciated...what do u think the piece is about???? thanks for reading, lolavie!
I wish I had listened, that I had kept my promises and been here to say those things your poetry told to me. I wish I had told you I loved you one too many times, instead of staying quiet for fear I'd bore you. I wish I had went with you.
I try to annhilate this feeling, but it is so hard, and so I focus on your art. But all my interpretations are personal now, because I can't separate them no matter how hard I try.
I was too afraid, I wanted to savor your beauty to much to tell you how much it hurt me when I read some of your poems. I didn't have the words to explain those that were great, and there were so many that had messages of doubt that it destroyed me inside.
this poem is very nice, but also very confusing. i have no idea what it is about. i am guessing it's about how you feel about someone but are scared to say to then. other than that i am lost. but good write. if you work on it, i think it could be really good