I think this is for him, simply because I never said I was the only one for you. And because he was the one you were trying to woo.
But you were looking for signs with me too, the way you stared at me that last afternoon... I almost asked to go with you. To let me buy you a place to stay, anywhere but where you said you would go. But that stare was as if you stopped looking for signs I would prove my love, that you were trying to say goodbye instead.
Wow.. Just, wow. I loved it.. And the amazing part was a certin song that makes me think of my ex was playing when I read this.. It's great... Your use of words: really good... I like this one a lot, so I am gonna add it to my favorites.
this is really great! i love reading songs.. i dont know why i just do and i think this is the best one ive read in awhile..your use of words is just wonderful and i love how you broke up the lines... i can just hear it being sung its so sad... but i know the feeling all too well lately and you just put it into words so beautifully.. i think its going in my favorites i dont think i have anything to criticize..so i guess thats it... love, peace, and happiness!