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    dots Submission Name: Calmingdots
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    Author: Ygi
    ASL Info:    17/m
    Elite Ratio:    5.55 - 290/149/165
    Words: 159
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 105
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 992



    Description:
       This came from two things I wrote very quickly, and spliced together, editing out parts I felt were too "angry". Pretty simple/straight forward piece, I think I might slowly be leaning more towards a simple/straight forward style... i don't know if i'm happy about that or not. w/e


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    dotsCalmingdots
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    I'm gonna try and marry you
    but I won't make it past my door
    maybe the sun will shine
    maybe the autumn leaves will come
    and paint the way, but
    I'm not all that good at walking
    and I'm bound to give up, but
    I will probably stay

    now the ocean is big
    and there's alot of fish in the sea
    but let me tell you something
    all those fish are looking similiar to me
    and you keep eating them
    now it aint to say that they aren't tastey
    but everyones a little rotten somewhere
    I can taste you for days
    I can taste for months
    I can taste for years
    and aint nothing quite so tastey

    Maybe we're doomed and maybe that's
    not as bad as the process
    I'd kiss you a thousand times I'd
    tell myself I could die here
    as much as I mean it, I swear
    there must be something I am missing




    Submitted on 2007-03-28 13:59:49     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Wow. This is very powerful and emotion filled. i am speechless. I can really relate to this right now. i love this poem.
    | Posted on 2007-04-01 00:00:00 | by black rose13 | [ Reply to This ]



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