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    dots Submission Name: Three Pigeons and a Chocolate Chipdots
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    Author: SilverScent
    ASL Info:    19/Female/England
    Elite Ratio:    3.74 - 94/106/71
    Words: 123
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 59
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 843



    Description:
       Not sure where this idea came from. You can take it seriously, or not, whatever. It does have an actual meaning though, somewhere amongst the weird subject matter.


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    dotsThree Pigeons and a Chocolate Chipdots
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    A chip of milky chocolate
    cast on the frigid tarmac,
    rolled into pigeon’s eye view.

    Dodging clumsy feet,
    her tattered ash wings
    ushered her to the tidbit,
    and with a bow or two
    her beak itched her to peck.

    And it nibbled back.

    Eager eyes mirrored hers,
    as the fluffy gentleman
    receded with a coo and
    an offering.

    Lady accepted,
    and with a flattered flutter
    of silver wings,
    she urged a taste…

    But, it was stony,

    and stolen…

    Her baffled beak
    caught the “civil” pigeon
    and his alpha brother
    tucking in to a treat upon the
    rooftop of Mc Donald’s.

    He was typically plump.

    And she was still grey.




    Submitted on 2007-03-28 14:41:06     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      I'm quite amused, and very interested. I'm not usually one to request clarification, but what did the lady pigeon end up eating?

    I like the feel of it, it's quaint and I'm not sure if that's an appropriate adjective, but I do like it.
    | Posted on 2007-03-29 00:00:00 | by reid kat | [ Reply to This ]



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