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Hurt


Author: lynn marsters
ASL Info:    20/f/canada
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Words: 195
Class/Type: Misc /Misc
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Hurt



“I hurt myself today to see if I still feel” Trent Reznor

Jittery
A flood of adrenaline
An old familiar feeling

I want it

I can taste it
I can feel it
I can smell it more than anything

At the merest mention
In the passing conversation
The casual comment

I want it

My heart dives into my stomach
I want to ask how much
I want to ask where and when

I want

I thought I was over it
I thought I was done
Over a year and I thought I could resist

I can’t

I want to wake up in the morning
Tired, crusty, sketchy
I want to talk till dawn
About nothing, to no one

I wanna roll up that bill
Feel it in my hand
I want to hurt

I want it

Oh, Lord give me a cigarette
A poor substitute for my intense longing
It’s only a matter of time

One night bored and stoned
“Hey Lynn, wanna pitch on something?”

I’m not going to say no.
I don’t want to
I’m sorry




Submitted on 2007-03-28 17:32:16     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  well i use to be a cutter and i understand wanting pain in your life, and i do still think it should happen...just not in a physical way like that...but it caught my attention and though i wasn't over joyed by it, it was still worth the comment
| Posted on 2007-03-28 00:00:00 | by monophobic | [ Reply to This ]
  i really loved this, the way its written and your wording i just really loved it, and well though this isnt much of a comment but yea it was all i had to say.
| Posted on 2007-03-28 00:00:00 | by ira | [ Reply to This ]


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