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    Author: She Is Insane
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    One day -


    I shall find someone who will sit on top of a roof with me, drink whiskey, vodka,tequila, beer, any type of alcoholic beverage, smoke, and talk philosophy/astronomy/politics/religion.


    Some day -


    I am going to find a girl who would let me finger her -
    who will finger me until my purity is scraped off and my sexual glands explode from too much fucking.




    Submitted on 2007-03-28 21:43:04     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      well, i am not quite sure how to respond to this, i agree with Rasberry down there, which exactly is it?

    it is good to know what you want, tho.....
    so congratulations.....i am not entirely sure your purity can be scraped off tho....

    i will have to think on that one now....

    xoxo
    | Posted on 2007-03-30 00:00:00 | by blu_kittin | [ Reply to This ]
      Very Different and very to the point. im not sure what this was though. was this like an adgenda or random thoughts?
    | Posted on 2007-03-29 00:00:00 | by Rainin_Raspbery | [ Reply to This ]


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