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    dots Submission Name: how we find our real friendsdots
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    Author: Thief
    ASL Info:    22/male/plainview
    Elite Ratio:    4.8 - 180/80/69
    Words: 253
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 533
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    Description:
       my good bud just reminded me of how i used to be at a time. difference being, ive alredy gone down this same road plenty of times. he's just begining...


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    we fall in love so fast and so easily
    but realize what could happpen
    we get to the point of saying
    "ive found my reason to live"
    but say other things
    when thier gone from our lives

    we tell them
    that we love them
    and mean it with all our heart
    but when they tell us back
    its almost without emotion
    and our heart is put in the dark
    ....put in doubt

    we are too happy around them
    that we dont want to believe
    what others are saying
    ...even if it is true...

    when they leave us
    we are too heart broken
    and cant control what we do
    and dont care at the moment either

    we hit walls
    cut our wrist
    slit our veins
    and other thing that we eventually regret

    we become careless
    we do as many drugs as possible
    just to rid of the memories
    we consume alchohol
    to dilute them

    and when all is begining to fail
    we reach for that pill that will kill or help
    and wonder if the pain will finally end

    but what if the pill doesn't work?
    what then? how can we end it all?
    the gun? the 15 story high building?
    cutting ourselves till we bleed to death?

    no...
    we turn to our friends,
    the ones that were there since the begining
    the ones that tried to help us
    the ones that empthize with our problem
    the ones that survived the same situation
    our real friends.




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