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    dots Submission Name: A Divine Day Offdots
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    Author: Epiphany
    ASL Info:    42/F/Universe
    Elite Ratio:    4.38 - 3342/2139/390
    Words: 57
    Class/Type: Prose/Love
    Total Views: 483
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    Bytes: 572



    Description:
       Took a special day for myself to nurture my spirituality

    love,peace,joy&smiles to share

    Happy Day!
    tif


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    dotsA Divine Day Offdots
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    A day off
    with God

    Aclean ~*~
    Anew ~*~
    Alive ~*~

    Drenched
    in
    Life-Giving
    rains
    of
    Spring ''''''''''

    Color drops
    As reflections

    Awater ~*~

    Vibrant
    Energy
    Cradled

    Agray ~*~

    And,
    "i"
    was

    Acomfort ~*~

    in the storm

    Aplenty ~*~ """ ~*~






    Submitted on 2007-03-29 12:11:15     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      You definately have unique style of writing. May I ask about the ~*~? hah. I like how you have conjoining words (Anew, Agray, etc..) but I wonder, why didn't you start off with (Aday) instead of A day. I suppose it doesn't relly matter.
    The imagery I get from this, is a little girl dancing in the rain, head tilted back, eyes shut, mouth opened, drenched, yet still is full of giddy. She may appear to be alone, but is having the time of her life.
    Very Nice indeed.
    | Posted on 2007-08-03 00:00:00 | by slntfirflm | [ Reply to This ]
      very nice and peaceful, ladyshines. today feels like that kind of day for me.. every day should be like this, don't you think? i've been trying to spend more time in solitude, praying and talking with the God of my understanding. it's helped a lot in these last few diffcult days.

    well done, sweetheart. i always enjoy coming to your page to read because i usually get such a serene feeling, or one of joy and laughter.. you're such an eternal optimist, and that is grand!!

    love&light,
    ~Cat
    | Posted on 2007-04-07 00:00:00 | by magnicat | [ Reply to This ]
      hey hi long time thanx for the sunshine the weather is just getting better but it is still going to snow this weekend
    i havn't been reading or writing much lately but will get bak to it soon

    hope all is well
    sandman
    | Posted on 2007-04-03 00:00:00 | by sandman | [ Reply to This ]
      Spending time with oneself, and one's maker is always a great idea. No doubt you will really enjoy the experience.

    Another inspirational write from you Tiff.

    Frank.
    | Posted on 2007-03-29 00:00:00 | by Frank Maguire | [ Reply to This ]


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