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    dots Submission Name: Knife in My Heart dots
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    Author: babygirl09
    ASL Info:    21/f/tx
    Elite Ratio:    2.29 - 69/63/49
    Words: 125
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 600
    Average Vote:    5.0000
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    dotsKnife in My Heart dots
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    Why don't you just kill me
    The knife's already in
    You swore that you'd always be here
    Where are you now?
    You came over and took everything from me
    I trusted and believed you
    When you said that you loved me
    Now what am I to do
    In this stupid school and world
    You've left me here with nothing
    But a knife stabbing in my heart
    I can't believe that you're goin after her
    She's my best friend
    What you don't realize is
    She only likes you as a friend
    Plus she's got her own guy
    Even though they're not supposed to be
    So why did you dump me?
    I just don't get it
    Why'd you leave me here
    With a knife in my heart?




    Submitted on 2007-03-29 15:04:37     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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       wow.... i know this feeling all to well. at first your angry and hurt, and you feel like the pain will never heal, then you start thinking if it was you.
    honey, i just want to say: know that it wasn't you and whoever put that knife in your heart is a jerk, and that if i was you i'd pull the knife out of my chest and use it to stab him in the back (or some random uncomfortable place... you can come up with your own conclusions for that one... lol) ok so maybe i wouldn't really stab someone but i'd have fun thinking about it:)
    a friend once told me: "No man is worth your tears and the one that is wouldn't make you cry" i don't know where she got that from but it seemed like pretty good advice:)
    | Posted on 2007-03-29 00:00:00 | by T. Garrett | [ Reply to This ]


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