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    Author: to-wit
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    grabbing a horn and sounding off wont allow the devil to speak.individually,the rap artist is dartist,throwing things at flat board,is that art?whats the doll in a sun be all?who's paris hilton?solid.see the difference?she's made,solid and in front.during the war of attrition,or solid war,the enemy,very deceitfully,crafted a masterful peice of symbol and droned a hole and individually tried to destroy america.they are there,the woman at walmart,the kid at fix it,and the boy at charles in charge.large portions of money dispelled rumors of coming conflict,join in the ever proportionate juliette routine,and you have the dream of the mixes but thats not dark enough,no they play on a different field and wonder american idol and its participants.juliette school is holding and im bolding through,not boldy through,but bolding through,almost picture bowling.what a sound,a bowling ball hitting pins loudly,or,even softly,they die when you do that,the enemy,for they cant stand any white noise,being electric,juliette,or reverbed,however,there are few who can stand the mix and they grab hold.they wont let go with proportion going your way,an american,but they will go all day with some support from the U.N.,and look at you,their master,and disater a pick of form.in other words,they drive off in cars they stole an dsay they are the winner because the cars they stole were made in europe and they are european too.well,you stole from self then and you were mixed up.luck of the draw is irish,but cant take it americans,minorities,full of them in their ranks,and dissinfected whites,not because they were cheated,because they were blue from the beggining and were sent to gods chosen,the americans,to rot it out from the beggining.they dont sound off well,they dont jell and they dont sale anything to buy,they do invent though.they invent lies and deceit and treat others like makers,they would kill you if they could.so,tie this in with the war in iraq and if you are an appealing american,you would be glad of any kill registered in america by our service people.however,there are mitigating circumstances in iraq.the people we are fighting,"the resistance",as the press is fond of calling them,is in most cases spanish and lebanese,not iraqi.iraqi people as i know them,are fond of america and american ideals and want to dream success into the ground.they dont dance yet,but we will teach them,lol,that one to the large group of iraqis who will be in eliteskills tonight to read this at their club in bagdad.however,there is one missing fact,the U.S. navy,they are the dumping ground for rich brats who dont care if we win or lose in duldrum,or iraq,the sound war as its called,due to the fact of weapons devoloped that aims at the personal ear,aimed all over the world,incidents of toddlers crying more,birds dying and weird rain have been traced to this and once it enters the system,i
    ,american cell phones and beepers and things,its damn hard to be rid of,somebody has to carry the ball,and thats what i did during this one,i carried the sound part through my technology,even envied it through natural channels,and its the bells whistle,let me tell ya.anyhow,with the sinking of the U.S. navy being complete,the retard jumps at the chance to enter the U.S. infrastructure system,we currently have one in the white house,george w. bush,and his friend rush limbaugh,and please believe friends,im no friend of the democrats,thats out there,in other writes ive done,but navy personel are dying by the fistful and thats where most of the american death total comes from in iraq,they shored navy people to rid themselves of them.one more fact,if you check death totals in the america's and the world,you will see they are up and cheered through sound.




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