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    dots Submission Name: Written in Blooddots

    Author: Zabriel
    ASL Info:    22/MI
    Elite Ratio:    4.8 - 122/120/63
    Words: 123
    Class/Type: Poetry/Broken
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       This is a sonnet written in the style of William Shakespeare. I know it looks really depressing and all that, but I'm really fine. I wrote this for a class I had, and the words just came to me. Iambic pentameter is hard to write in. I'm used to free verse. Besides the overt suicidal themes...well why don't you tell me what you see? Thanks for reading, and I hope that you enjoyed this piece.

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    dotsWritten in Blooddots

    The clock hands wave off last hours and say
    ‘Tis too late to recover squandered time
    My sun has set, and daylight hath stol’n away
    Knifepen in hand, write I this life’s final rhyme
    The night enfolds mine eyes which fail to see
    Any good left in the world in which we live
    My hopes shall now forever cease to be
    My life from me drains, like sand from the sieve
    Now battered down by the world’s greatest lie
    In my soul I have lost the will to fight
    Head laid in hands, all I can do is cry
    Despair takes me as darkness triumphs over light
    And pushes the blade into my weeping heart
    Samael’s solution, at death we do part.

    Submitted on 2007-03-30 07:41:50     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    That was grea! I love the ending. You should write more stuff like this, i's definitely my favourite :)

    Awesome job with this and I love the imagery, and your word choice was excellent.

    Cheers and God bless,

    | Posted on 2007-03-30 00:00:00 | by Mandi Gayle | [ Reply to This ]

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