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    dots Submission Name: Contrived Stormdots
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    Author: Soulraven
    ASL Info:    31/Male/Illinois
    Elite Ratio:    4.05 - 510/481/142
    Words: 212
    Class/Type: Poetry/Passion
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    dotsContrived Stormdots
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    Lightning lunges through the purple clouds.
    It rips and claps speaking out loud.
    Through my window a puny candlelight.
    Offering me a little lee way on this electric night.
    I think thereís nothing in the world I own.
    In a world full of people I am all alone.
    Then I remember your tiny womanly hands.
    And eyes as innocent as the sacrificial lamb.
    When I think of you beautiful girl.
    The toes in my shoes begin to curl.
    My index finger slips under the shoulders of your dress.
    Revealing perfect milky prompt breasts.
    With just your gentle touch you ease.
    My maddening emotional seas.
    When my eyes look as if in alarm.
    I head straight for your open arms.
    This storm has gotten me a little shaken.
    So, perhaps I could be mistaken.
    This perfect consciousness erodes.
    As lightning strikes before me emotion explodes.
    Staring into the darkness I see all my dreams.
    Forgotten feelings to the surface this storm brings.
    All of the answers are out there, I need to discover.
    After this calamity of a storm we will get together.
    In this lonely night I confide.
    As I realize the storm Iíve created subsides.
    Iíve decided to cross this invisible line.
    Underneath my mindís storm was a beautiful sunshine.




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      lot of reaching in this one, i like th reference to sacrificial lamb, i wander were you get your inspirations sometimes, you write I'll read
    | Posted on 2004-02-02 00:00:00 | by brokenbatman | [ Reply to This ]


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