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    dots Submission Name: Fallen Angeldots
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    Author: whendt
    Elite Ratio:    1.98 - 902/387/108
    Words: 107
    Class/Type: Poetry/
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    Description:
       just messing with some words


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    dotsFallen Angeldots
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    Fallen Angel
    ripped and bruised
    Always stands accused

    Your wings have turned black
    Your eyes have lost their soul inside
    Still you smile, and laugh to all with in

    Wondering around dazed and confused you think
    Your day will come when you swim in a lake of fire.
    "Nobody want's to go to fire lake", plays in your head…

    But still you offer me to come and play down by the water.
    Its cold outside and everything has lost its taste for now and then.
    The end is near ,and all you have to say is so long for now Ta Ta Toots




    Submitted on 2007-03-30 14:42:46     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      i like it. i like the image you literally drew with your word. dont pay so much attention to how it looks as to how it sound. keep posting. i see potential.




    tina
    | Posted on 2007-06-07 00:00:00 | by ladiesplanet1 | [ Reply to This ]



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