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    dots Submission Name: Thoughts from the Raindots
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    Author: Persephone
    ASL Info:    19/f/ US
    Elite Ratio:    3.53 - 328/352/136
    Words: 367
    Class/Type: Personal Quotes/Depressed
    Total Views: 818
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    Bytes: 2134



    Description:
       Right, this is pretty...umm....not so happy stuff. Most if it has come from the fact that it's been raining non-stop around here...and that puts me in a pretty sad mood. Sorry for the emo-ness.


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    dotsThoughts from the Raindots
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    - If ever you believed in something, believe in the lie. You can't spell believe without it.

    - You'd think it'd get easier, living and dying, and just plain existing. You'd think it would...it doesn't.

    - And she's the type of girl that secretly reads love stories and fantasizes over the perfect man. You'd never think of her that way, but maybe you should.

    - Such sweet bonds of family and blood, so easily cut with words.

    - Looking back now, I say, we never look back again.

    - There are times when she wonders what she did wrong, and times what she did that was so right.

    - Will they ever be good enough? Will they ever fit into your perfect world, what you expect children to be?

    - Quick as a flash, her words were out, a stiletto to the heart and knife in the back.

    - I wish you'd finally realize, that I've gotten over you. Except, we both know I haven't.

    - Some people never get over being gotten over.

    - Choke on your lies, I hope you die.

    - And one bad day turned into a bad week into a bad month into a bad year, until she's only had seventeen years of bad days.

    - I know. I'm such a rebel, I run with scissors and fall up stairs.

    - Perfection was never so perfect as the scars on her face from the fire that licked away the modeling career, best friends, and the love of her life.

    - If only you had walked through half the fire she had, maybe then you would really see.

    - The truth is, every girl wants to be told she's something special,and yet she doesn't want to hear it. She wants to know that even if she's crying, no one looks better than her, and yet she'd smack you if you told her. And every girl wants to be asked if something's wrong until she doesn't have to say nothing, and say what's really happening.

    - Crystallic tears so beautiful and blue, so see through, just like you.




    Submitted on 2007-03-30 17:09:47     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      I know I say it every time, but I just love all your quotes! I like all of them, but I think that I like the last two the best. The second to last one is just so true and the last one is beautifully written, I just love the way that it flows and rhymes.
    | Posted on 2007-04-01 00:00:00 | by jennah | [ Reply to This ]


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