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lost in a world that is cruel and unforgiving
trying to run from a man who's unrelenting
from one city to the next he follows
if only i could guarantee another tomorrow.
disappearing soon becomes a routine
blending in becomes easy when trying not to create a scene
a strong grip upon my fragile arm
if i do as he says there will be no harm
no time to go out and make friends
watching my back for the guys he may send
losing ground each and every day
hopping from city to city trying to get away.
a failed attempt at his kind of love
beatings and arguements i'd had enough
on the run since that fateful night
must keep a way out always in my sight.
Submitted on 2007-03-30 19:28:04
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hey hi thanx for the comment on obsession it was just a blurb off the top of me head
i like this post of yours it is so true to life sometimes when things are tough we have to dpo whatever to get by
hope all is good and all the best in 08
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