Writingpoetry

[ Join Free! ]
(No Spam mail)

dotsdots
nav
  • RolePlay
  • Join Us
  • Writings
  • Shoutbox
  • Community
  • Digg Mashup
  • Mp3 Search
  • Online Education
  • My Youtube
  • Ear Training
  • Funny Pics
  • nav



    nav
  • Role Play
  • Piano Music
  • Free Videos
  • Web 2.0
  • nav



    << | >>
    poetry


    dots Submission Name: domestic abusedots
    --------------------------------------------------------





    Author: boo boo
    ASL Info:    18/f/mi
    Elite Ratio:    2.74 - 108/104/60
    Words: 131
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 464
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 786



    Description:
       


    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsdomestic abusedots
    -------------------------------------------


    lost in a world that is cruel and unforgiving
    trying to run from a man who's unrelenting
    from one city to the next he follows
    if only i could guarantee another tomorrow.

    disappearing soon becomes a routine
    blending in becomes easy when trying not to create a scene
    a strong grip upon my fragile arm
    if i do as he says there will be no harm

    no time to go out and make friends
    watching my back for the guys he may send
    losing ground each and every day
    hopping from city to city trying to get away.

    a failed attempt at his kind of love
    beatings and arguements i'd had enough
    on the run since that fateful night
    must keep a way out always in my sight.




    Submitted on 2007-03-30 19:28:04     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
    Submissions: [ Previous ] [ Next ]

    Rate This Submission

    1: >_<
    2: I dunno...
    3: meh!
    4: Pretty cool
    5: Wow!




    ||| Comments |||
      hey hi thanx for the comment on obsession it was just a blurb off the top of me head
    i like this post of yours it is so true to life sometimes when things are tough we have to dpo whatever to get by
    hope all is good and all the best in 08

    sandman
    | Posted on 2008-01-03 00:00:00 | by sandman | [ Reply to This ]


    Think Feedback more than Compliments :: [ Guidelines ]

    1. Be honest.
    2. Try not to give only compliments.
    3. How did it make you feel?
    4. Why did it make you feel that way?
    5. Which parts?
    6. What distracted from the piece?
    7. What was unclear?
    8. What does it remind you of?
    9. How could it be improved?
    10. What would you have done differently?
    11. What was your interpretation of it?
    12. Does it feel original?



    139358

    Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
    It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

    Compartments written by TheStillSilence
    a leaf of shadow and edge written by Daniel Barlow
    A Worsening Effect written by Daniel Barlow
    Starseed written by endlessgame23
    Sword in the Water written by Wolfwatching
    Relentless. The Visceral Fracture. written by Daniel Barlow
    Gaia written by endlessgame23
    The Human Harmonic written by Daniel Barlow
    Adoration written by TheStillSilence
    Ciggarettes written by Poetic_tragedy6
    going,,,"Skin." written by teika5
    Loop-di-Loop written by endlessgame23
    Hyle written by endlessgame23
    Live In Between written by teika5
    When Sirens Whisper written by HisNameIsNoMore
    A Thousand Reflections written by endlessgame23
    The Abyss of Love written by poetotoe
    untitled written by Outlaw
    no sky on the other side written by teika5
    Mystery Read written by kyserin
    Twin Intercept written by Daniel Barlow
    A bit of Pain written by teika5
    Verse: written by Daniel Barlow
    Snippet written by Daniel Barlow
    The Curtain Call written by faideddarkness
    Day 5 written by TheStillSilence
    Things They (Don't) Say written by TheStillSilence
    Across the bed written by expiring_touch
    Day 6 written by TheStillSilence
    The World written by jjd

    Google
     


    poetry

    dotsLogindots

    User Name:

    Password:

    [ Quick Signup ]
    [ Lost Password ]


    January 10 07
    131,497 Poems
    Posted

    I have 14,000+ Subscribers on Youtube. See my Video Tutorials

    [ Angst Poetry ]
    [ Cutters ]
    [ Famous Poetry ]
    [ Poetry Scams ]



    FontSize:
    [ Smaller ] [ Bigger ]
     Poetry