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    dots Submission Name: domestic abusedots

    Author: boo boo
    ASL Info:    18/f/mi
    Elite Ratio:    2.74 - 108/104/60
    Words: 131
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    dotsdomestic abusedots

    lost in a world that is cruel and unforgiving
    trying to run from a man who's unrelenting
    from one city to the next he follows
    if only i could guarantee another tomorrow.

    disappearing soon becomes a routine
    blending in becomes easy when trying not to create a scene
    a strong grip upon my fragile arm
    if i do as he says there will be no harm

    no time to go out and make friends
    watching my back for the guys he may send
    losing ground each and every day
    hopping from city to city trying to get away.

    a failed attempt at his kind of love
    beatings and arguements i'd had enough
    on the run since that fateful night
    must keep a way out always in my sight.

    Submitted on 2007-03-30 19:28:04     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      hey hi thanx for the comment on obsession it was just a blurb off the top of me head
    i like this post of yours it is so true to life sometimes when things are tough we have to dpo whatever to get by
    hope all is good and all the best in 08

    | Posted on 2008-01-03 00:00:00 | by sandman | [ Reply to This ]

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