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    dots Submission Name: i amdots
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    Author: boo boo
    ASL Info:    18/f/mi
    Elite Ratio:    2.74 - 108/104/60
    Words: 103
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 474
    Average Vote:    4.0000
    Bytes: 596



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    dotsi amdots
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    i am a rose with thorns to protect me
    from a world so cruel and mean.

    i am a woman seeking the truth
    about a world that's farther than it seems.

    i am the wind whispering to the sea
    of a time when love ruled all.

    i am a rebel fighting a conformist war
    refusing to walk away with my pride so small.

    i am a fighter looking for a fight
    testing and seeking until i move ahead

    i am a princess exploring my kingdom
    realixing that despite being burned amd hurt my love is not dead.




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