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    dots Submission Name: blank, unsharpened, uncapped, crumpleddots
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    Author: boo boo
    ASL Info:    18/f/mi
    Elite Ratio:    2.74 - 108/104/60
    Words: 65
    Class/Type: Poetry/Comedy
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    dotsblank, unsharpened, uncapped, crumpleddots
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    blank paper is no more.
    blank paper strewn about my flaming floor.

    unsharpened pencils a virgin thing.
    unsharpened pencils a chaos it's sure to bring.

    uncapped pens brand new without a drop of ink.
    uncapped pens haunting my mind and the thoughts i think.

    crumpled thoughts tossed aimlessly towards the trash.
    crumpled thoughts come back once the time has passed.





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