my attention deviates to a manís gasp for air
my eyes follow his hands
as he reaches to retie the loose
knot of his shoelace
sitting from afar, in a deep trance
i see the frustration of his brow
unaware that he is the subject of my thought
quite the interesting read, I must say. I was more or less astonished, did not expect this from the title. But a good title choice never the less.
It is well written, to me it is either a shy lover or a stalker. If that thought offends you, my apologies. But that is what I take from this, it reminds me of being the shy kid who never could get close to the opposite gender, so I'd just keep my distance. Enjoyed it, congratulations on a great write.