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    dots Submission Name: A Letter 2 My Heartdots
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    Author: Poetic_tragedy6
    ASL Info:    25/F/OR
    Elite Ratio:    2.65 - 114/153/74
    Words: 139
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Love
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    Average Vote:    5.0000
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    dotsA Letter 2 My Heartdots
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    Dear Heart,

    I wish you'd stop giving yourself away. I'm tired of having to pick you up and glue you back together. Stop forgiving them. People are never going to change. It's time to bulid walls around yourself. Your too fragile to be broken that many times. The next one might be the last... You need to become hard. Your way too soft and open. Make people earn you. I mean my eyes are so dry from crying all the time. They want to stop & they can only stop if you stop being the way you are. Heart, I don't know how much more I can take. You hurt all the time. Maybe it's time to stop loving and just stop beating. You'd do us all a favor if you'd just stop...

    XoXo,

    ME




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