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i can't take this


Author: black rose13
ASL Info:    16/f/where do I live?
Elite Ratio:    1.35 - 137 /97 /39
Words: 163
Class/Type: Poetry /I hate you
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some thing that i just had to put out there because im getting of being stalked by my ex- boyfriend.


i can't take this



Why can't you see that i don't love you.
All this pain that you put me through,
has only made me stronger.

Why do you feel like you have to put me down.
I'm tired of hearing that you want me back.
You've taken this way too far.

Now i don't want to be your enemy,
I just want you to see what these drugs are doing to you.

Why do you feel like you have to put me down.
i'm tired of hearing that you want me back.
You've taken this way too far.

You say you want to be my friend but you call me a whore for putting our love to an end.

Why do you feel like you have to put me down.
I'm tired of hearing that you want me back.
You've taken this way too far.

You need to learn to respect me.
And let me and my love be.




Submitted on 2007-03-31 09:31:15     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  okay julia
i know who this is about right off the bat
and trust me (and you should already know this)
that he really isnt worth it
and i told you he would call you a whore
i'll find you a scrawny little skinny thing that isnt like those two THINGS you dated

i agree that the clingy ones do suck the worst
i dated her brother (which u already know)
and he was clingy and sensitive and it really sucks

just remember i am here and i'll find you someone sweet

ily
truthbetold
| Posted on 2007-08-24 00:00:00 | by truthbetold | [ Reply to This ]
  the clinging ones suck the worst.... lol do what i do and hook him up with someone...any one else.

make the most of break
| Posted on 2007-03-31 00:00:00 | by in shadow | [ Reply to This ]


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