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Deep


Author: Black-Death
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Deep



Deep inside every one
There is the power to hate
The power to love
Deep inside every one
There is a child screaming for love
A child Screaming to hate
Deep inside
You have the power to kill
The power to create
Deep inside




Submitted on 2007-03-31 18:46:12     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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