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    dots Submission Name: amber pacificdots
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    Author: EEKS
    Elite Ratio:    2.7 - 647/1206/773
    Words: 199
    Class/Type: Misc/Friendship
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    dotsamber pacificdots
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    i said
    id love whoever got me that album
    so you
    got me all of them
    and i still couldnt live up to that promise
    because kisses arent promises
    i forgot to tell you that
    kisses are never promises
    they can be apologies though
    and i dont know what to call it

    im sorry
    for sure even though you kept repeating that you were ok
    i guess you were
    but you might not be now
    or later
    you said you wished he wouldnt come
    or that things wouldnt work out
    and in a way i wish that too
    just so i could be there for you

    but the other part of me knows the truth
    i really do love him
    even when hes not there
    or he doesnt call
    or when he does all that stupid stuff with his stupid friends
    who all probably think im an idiot
    even then i love him so much
    and youre really just my friend

    im sorry
    and i hope you dont doubt it
    this wasnt som sick jack game
    i wasnt trying to prove something
    i just reached out and you were there
    heres a clue: move next time




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