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    dots Submission Name: Could it be?dots
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    Author: black rose13
    ASL Info:    16/f/where do I live?
    Elite Ratio:    1.35 - 137/97/39
    Words: 187
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 806
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1156



    Description:
       This is for the guy that has totally stolen my heart. I love him so much.


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    dotsCould it be?dots
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    Well I'm sorry if I'm a bore,
    but I've nver felt this way before.
    (but) The way you hold my hand makes me shake.
    The way you kiss me makes me feel awake.
    The way you say you're sorry when you haven't done a thing.

    Could it be?
    That I've found the one to hold me close.
    Could it be?
    He's the perfect drug that I'm addicted to.
    Could it be?
    He feels the same way.

    Well I'm sorry if I'm a bore.
    But I've never felt this way before.
    (but) The way you say you love me makes me squeak.
    The way you hold me makes me weak.
    The way your sad eyes suddenly look bright for just a moment.

    well I'm sorry sweetie.
    Because I could go on forever,
    on how perfect you are for me.

    Could it be?
    That I've found the one to hold me close.
    Could it be?
    He's the perfect drug that I'm addicted to.
    Could it be?
    He feels the same way.

    This is just my way to say that i love you too.




    Submitted on 2007-04-01 10:41:39     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      i think of a song and it keeps re playing in my mind *mwah *

    <33 sugazz
    | Posted on 2007-04-03 00:00:00 | by truthbetold | [ Reply to This ]
      awww that so cute... looks like i'm not the only one feeling sappy this weekend
    | Posted on 2007-04-01 00:00:00 | by in shadow | [ Reply to This ]


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